You made good points, and connected your leverage points well, however your concept map is really busy, and a little hard to follow at times. I would suggest explaining your points with more detail and organizing your concept map. Don't forget to decribes trends, patterns and cause and effects within your map.
The Explanation of your concept map is good,but there is a little bit too much going on in the map itself. Try spreading it out so the lines are more visable
At first glance this is confusing and kind if intimidating to the reader. You do have a lot of good ideas and connections on your concept map like transportation and how you show that most things connect back to electricity. i think it could be improved if it was more spread out and if the colors matched.
Your concept map does its job, allthough at times it is difficult to follow and relate things together. Also I would encourage integrating global politics into your map some how. Otherwise, I agree wtih what you have said and like the detail you have used.
Your map is very thorough. I wonder how everything relates back to electricity? But I understand the point you're trying to convery and think this is a very well thought our concept map.
your map has a good job, i learn more to thedetails that you make , it is wonderful,excellence and etc, now i wonder my lessons and i will not foget it anymore...........................
You made good points, and connected your leverage points well, however your concept map is really busy, and a little hard to follow at times. I would suggest explaining your points with more detail and organizing your concept map. Don't forget to decribes trends, patterns and cause and effects within your map.
ReplyDeleteThis is from Lisa M. not Melissa G.
The Explanation of your concept map is good,but there is a little bit too much going on in the map itself. Try spreading it out so the lines are more visable
ReplyDeleteThis is from Jacob Horn
At first glance this is confusing and kind if intimidating to the reader. You do have a lot of good ideas and connections on your concept map like transportation and how you show that most things connect back to electricity. i think it could be improved if it was more spread out and if the colors matched.
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Your concept map does its job, allthough at times it is difficult to follow and relate things together. Also I would encourage integrating global politics into your map some how. Otherwise, I agree wtih what you have said and like the detail you have used.
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Your map is very thorough. I wonder how everything relates back to electricity? But I understand the point you're trying to convery and think this is a very well thought our concept map.
ReplyDeleteyour map has a good job, i learn more to thedetails that you make , it is wonderful,excellence and etc, now i wonder my lessons and i will not foget it anymore...........................
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